A STRUGGLE FOR LIFE

He treats kindly

She never knows

His sincere love

He cringes to tell

His truism to her

They forget their

Mutual agreement of

Unconditional love

Life treats them like

A fall and eliminate

Their dreams harshly

Fell in to the ground

Painful to see the

Love birds hard luck

Only God knows the

Truth of their life

And experience

Gave them the chance

For soul-searching and

It brings eminent life

Suni Santhosh

22/11/2019

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32 Comments Add yours

  1. Suni, love,hope and life all blended together in these wonderful lines!!

    1. sunipukadiyil says:

      Love and hope always encourages us to move forward in life! Thank you dear friend for your lovely interaction! πŸ’œ

  2. Indira says:

    A soul searching will give true picture of what is existing…

    1. Beautiful words Dear ❀️..love the last lines..

    2. sunipukadiyil says:

      Yes, you are 100% correct my dear friend! πŸ’œ

    3. sunipukadiyil says:

      Yes, Indira we can find out exactly about the endurance of life..! Thank you! ❀

  3. Michelle says:

    What a beautiful story!

    1. sunipukadiyil says:

      Many of us go through this situation! Thank you Michelle for your time and words! Have a great weekend! πŸ’œ

  4. Very beautiful lines, it tells more about life

    1. sunipukadiyil says:

      Thank you so much dear Subhashini! πŸ’™πŸ™

  5. Isha says:

    So deep and lovely! Enjoyed reading this piece ❀️

    1. sunipukadiyil says:

      Glad to hear! Thank you for reading Isha πŸ˜ŠπŸŒΌπŸ’œ

      1. Isha says:

        PleasureπŸ’œ

  6. A beautifully written poem Suni. Such meaningful words showing life and love interwoven. Enjoyed this very much.πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜Ί

    1. sunipukadiyil says:

      Yes Steve life and love are correlated with each other and that will motivate us throughout our journey! Thank you very much for your wonderful opinion Steve! 🌼😊

      1. My pleasure Suni!😁😸

  7. Beautifully written Suni! Love, hope, beautiful!

    1. sunipukadiyil says:

      Hi, Ribana love and hope leads and encourages us through life and lays foundation of our life! Thank you very much for your time! Have a great week! πŸ˜ŠπŸŒΌπŸ’•

      1. Very true dear Suni! πŸ˜ŠπŸ’•πŸŒΈ

      2. sunipukadiyil says:

        Much appreciated my dear friend! ,πŸ’•πŸŒΌπŸ˜Š

    2. sunipukadiyil says:

      Love and hope motivate us in our life ! Thank you my dear friend! 😊🌼 πŸ’™

  8. Chocoviv says:

    Beautiful!

    1. sunipukadiyil says:

      Thank you very much for your appreciation! πŸ˜ŠπŸ’œ

      1. Chocoviv says:

        You’re welcome πŸ˜‡

  9. Love and hope is what life is all about! This is a beautiful poem Suni!

    1. sunipukadiyil says:

      Yes Diane, love and hope are related to each other in life! Thank you very much Diane! 😊 Have a great day! πŸ’•

  10. asgarmollart says:

    Really nice post friend, I like your work. Here is a new friend, Stay connected always.

  11. francisashis says:

    A lovely poem.thanks for sharing.

    1. sunipukadiyil says:

      Glad to hear! Thank you! 😊

      1. francisashis says:

        Most welcome.πŸŒΉπŸ™

  12. Gunjan Arora says:

    If there’s love there is hope. Strange are the heart of the two in love; made me nostalgic ❀️… Loved rather I connected with your beautiful verses πŸ’• πŸŒΈπŸ™

    1. sunipukadiyil says:

      Its so great to know you are connected in the love birds life! Thank you very much for your valuable expression my dear friend! 😊 πŸ’œπŸ™

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