Aged health is atrophied

Younger minds wither

Thoughts of strength are away

Ears are hard in hearing


Cheeks spread with wrinkles

Eyes are pale in color

Necks have shrunk

Shoulder-bones are cracked


Nails are hard and brittle

Hard lines in rough hands

Legs are unsteady like a drunk

Body looses the energy


Appeal goes to the creator

He heard the humble request

Got the full emission of energy

Returning powerfully like a sun


Suni Santhosh




17 Comments Add yours

  1. Indira says:


    1. sunipukadiyil says:

      Yea ultimate reality Indira. Thank you for your wise words! πŸ’•

  2. Sometimes people try to avoid this rule or tune of life as you say and that’s their biggest mistake because no one can escape this. This was a nice and enlightening poem☺️

    1. sunipukadiyil says:

      Yes Ramyani nobody can escape from this destiny. Thank you for your share. Have a great weekend! 🌸😊❀

      1. It’s my pleasure ☺️

  3. Beautiful! Unfortunately something that we cannot change but I guess each age has its beauty :)😊❀
    Have a wonderful week Suni! 😊❀

    1. sunipukadiyil says:

      Yea sure each age has its own beauty but can’tt change the ultimate reality. Have a great time Ribana! πŸ˜ŠπŸ’œπŸ™

      1. Dear Suni, I have tagged you for Rory’s 321 Quote Me with topic Food for thought πŸ™‚ Enjoy!

  4. Gunjan Arora says:

    Once again you’ve nailed it. The journey that we all are traveling…aware or unaware! Meaningful and deep. Loved reading β€οΈπŸŒΈπŸ™

    1. sunipukadiyil says:

      Thank you my dear friend for your time and meaningful words!πŸ’™πŸŒΌπŸ™

  5. Wow you said it perfectly! Unfortunately I understand some of those!

    1. sunipukadiyil says:

      Diane, our creator will give us a strong mind and body! πŸ™

  6. Jyo says:

    That’s Beautiful 😍

    1. sunipukadiyil says:

      Thank you for your time and consideration! 😊

  7. Winnie says:

    Very well said, Suni! ❀️🌺

    1. sunipukadiyil says:

      Thank you my dear! πŸŒΉπŸ’œπŸŒΌ

      1. Winnie says:

        You’re welcome, Suni! ❀️🌺

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