My mind is frightened with fear

In seeing the vultures

I address my fear to God


Vultures are flying around

And watching their prey

Staring at me and spotted  me


I am helpless

I am looking around for help

My Lord appeared like a light


He held me lightly

Freed me from the vultures






22 Comments Add yours

  1. Very well written and vividly expressed Suni! Hope you are having a great day!😃😺

    1. sunipukadiyil says:

      Thank you Steve! Yes it was!May God bless you! Have a great day! 😊

      1. Thank you so much Suni! God bless!

  2. Faith in God is the biggest weapon!

    1. sunipukadiyil says:

      Yes ofcourse Deeksha! Thank you!😊💙

  3. Michelle says:

    I love this! I love how God is always right there all the time. 🙂

    1. sunipukadiyil says:

      Yes Michelle God is the saver of us in an every mournful situations! 😊
      Thank you! 💙

  4. Isha says:

    Very powerful🙂❤️

    1. sunipukadiyil says:

      Thank you Isha for your lovely interaction! 😊🌸💞

      1. Isha says:


  5. Beautiful express dear Suni 😊💙

    1. sunipukadiyil says:

      Thank you very much my dear friend😊💕🌸!

  6. Very nice!!! Your writing is so inspiring.

    1. sunipukadiyil says:

      God is always along with our journey! Thank you my dear friend!😊

  7. Great poetry Suni!❤️

    1. sunipukadiyil says:

      Thank you Ramyani! 💕

  8. Winnie says:

    This is beautiful! ❤️🌺

  9. A great metaphorical social critique!! 🙂

    1. sunipukadiyil says:

      Thank you very much for this special honour! Have a wonderful day! 😊

      1. My greatest pleasure!!

    1. sunipukadiyil says:

      God bless you! Thank you dear! 💕

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