Rhythm of rain drops

Come along the place

Flowering down the earth

And refresh the earth

Tree’s get the energy

To spread their roots

Rivers overflow to

Flow along the land

Human mind is filled

Incite with expectations

Raise the land cultivatable

Seeds are spread in the land

Suni Santhosh



33 Comments Add yours

  1. Hi Suni! This poem is beautiful and refreshing. it rightly captures the rhythm of rain indeed. I am so sorry, I was off for quite a time but I would never miss your amazing writings. Lots of love XD

    1. sunipukadiyil says:

      Yes, Normal rain is refreshing our earth How are you! I know you are busy in studes! I think now you are a little free! Thank you my dear for your wonderful interaction! πŸ˜ŠπŸŒΈπŸ’™

      1. Monsoon was late this year but it’s pouring down heavy these days! I am good 😊 I am a little busy, sadly😬 But I can manage time for my refreshments πŸ˜‚

      2. sunipukadiyil says:

        Yes, now a days its heavy rain ! I know you are busy! 😊 Hmm refreshment is always good for our health! πŸ’™ Have a great week ahead Ramyani! πŸ˜ŠπŸ’•

    1. sunipukadiyil says:

      Thank you friend! πŸ’™

  2. πŸ‘Œ, great post!

    1. sunipukadiyil says:

      Thank you my dear friend! 🌸

  3. Outosego says:

    Liked and shared. Thank you, and take care.

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    1. sunipukadiyil says:

      Oh thank you very much.

      1. Outosego says:

        You’ re welcome, dear. Have a wonderful day.

  4. So beautiful poem Suni! Lately I like the rains, as long as I’m at home though πŸ˜‰πŸ€—πŸ’•

    1. sunipukadiyil says:

      Thank you my dear friend for your time and words! Great week ahead! πŸ˜ŠπŸŒΈπŸ’™

  5. What a beautiful poem with so much meaning!!

    1. sunipukadiyil says:

      Thank you my dear friend! 😊

  6. Gunjan Arora says:

    Sweet and beautiful lines πŸŒΈπŸ™πŸ˜‡

    1. sunipukadiyil says:

      Thank you my dear friend!😊 πŸ’™πŸŒΉ

  7. Gunjan Arora says:

    Btw all posts are appearing twice on your page… Why?

    1. sunipukadiyil says:

      Yes Gunjan I also found sometimes it happens but I don’t know what is the reason! WP or my phone’s fault! Yes, patiently waiting for the cause!

  8. A very beautiful poem about the rain Suni!πŸ˜€πŸ˜Ί

    1. sunipukadiyil says:

      Thank you Steve for your lovely words! 😊

      1. You’re welcome Suni!πŸ˜ƒ

  9. Winnie says:

    What a lovely poem! πŸ˜ŠπŸ’–

    1. sunipukadiyil says:

      Thank you my dear!❀

      1. Winnie says:

        My pleasure! ❀️

  10. da-AL says:

    Gorgeous! Makes me wish for rain now πŸ™‚

    1. sunipukadiyil says:


    2. sunipukadiyil says:

      This opinion is great ! Thank you my dear friend for your kind interaction! πŸ’™

  11. This so sweet!!

    1. sunipukadiyil says:

      Normal rain refresh our mind and earth! Thank you very much for your sweet words! 😊

      1. My greatest pleasure!! πŸ™‚

  12. Cherryl says:

    Lovely πŸ˜ŠπŸ’¦

    1. sunipukadiyil says:

      Thank you very much! 😊

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